Wednesday, August 1, 2012

1,716 Words... Finally a Human

Alice is the main character of this novel, a 40 year old writer with a pathological fear of laying down roots and a habit of having nightmares. She finally decided to show up, and here is a brief excerpt of her waking from one such nightmare... Katie, my first shout out to your novel. I'm sure there will be many along the way. "She couldn’t remember the particulars of the dream she was rising from now, slowly as ever,
but her skin felt ice cold despite the humid air of her apartment, and she was uncertain whether she were laying in her bed at all, or floating on the surface of frigid water. She couldn’t move, not yet, her body hadn’t let go of the dream enough, but she began to take in the details of her bedroom: the poster of Sidney Crosby, celebrating one of the most important goals in hockey, the ‘golden goal’ as she liked to call it and probably others with equally good taste did as well. How often had Sid been the first visible sign of sanity in the insane sleep world she occupied? She had lost count, or perhaps more truthfully, she had never counted at all, being the sort of person who didn’t believe in the power of counting."

5 comments:

  1. She may not believe in the power of counting, but at least she has the sense to believe in the power of Sid and the Golden Goal.

    Great job on your first day! Can't wait to learn more about how the house and Alice interact.

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  2. Sounds great so far. I love the house and your character seems like a woman with great judgment based on her poster choice. Can't wait to read more.

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  3. Amazing! God, the novels are kicking serious ass this year!!
    I love the way your characterizations make me think and wonder about people. Right now I'm pondering the type of person who doesn't believe in the power of counting - what does that tell us about her? Very interesting.

    I also love the shoutout to Katie - although it wasn't very demeaning or insulting, so it wasn't quite my style of shoutout. :)

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  4. Also, I'm not afraid to be the lone wolf who thinks that poster of Sidney Crosby is pretty creepy. In fact, he looks like a wolf or werewolf or demon of some kind. (And no, I don't think I've been watching too much Buffy. If anything, I haven't been watching enough.)

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  5. Sid does look a bit rabid. Terrifying that this is the "first visible sign of sanity" when she wakes from her nightmares. It really adds to the atmosphere of disquiet.

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